Every secret thing

This is my story, and that of my husband and our best friends. I've changed their names,  but essentially, everything happened as I have written it. I wish it hadn't. I wish I could just rub out that last awful conversation I had with Amy at the coffee shop.
Amy and Mike were our oldest friends. We'd known them since college days and when we married, Mike was Dave's best man and Amy my bridesmaid. Then they married each other soon after that. At first we saw a lot of each other,  dropping in for coffee or  having dinner out together. 
When Kirsty was born two years later, we asked them to be her godparents. They took their duties seriously and never arrived without a gift for our baby. They were always willing to baby-sit and Kirsty adored them. By this time, Dave had been appointed  assistant manager at the bank and we were living in a starter home in Lansdowne. I stayed home to look after Kirsty and without my salary as a publisher's assistant there wasn't much money for shows or dinners out.
Mike had just started his own computer business, Amy was chief buyer for a big children's clothing store and they had bought a beautiful apartment in Tamboers Kloof, one of those glass and chrome blocks against the mountain. 
Our lives were taking pretty different paths by then, but Mike and Dave kept in contact with a weekly game of squash. Every Tuesday, without fail, they'd meet at the gym, get sweaty together and finish with a couple of beers in the pub. The whole male-bonding thing. Amy and I used to laugh about it but they got quite annoyed if their wives arranged anything else for a Tuesday night.  I think putting the world to rights over the beers was more important than the game.
Amy and I continued to meet for coffee  whenever we could, but she was often away on buying trips to London and Frankfurt from where she'd return with her arms full of hand-smocked dresses from London or patchwork dungarees from Spain.  Until she outgrew children's sizes, Kirsty was the best-dressed kid on the block. Dave insisted on taking photos of her in her new outfits and there were several framed pictures of the little model in their sitting room.
I don't know when Amy and Mike gave up on the idea of having children of their own, but our daughter certainly benefited from their lack of family. They punctuated the years with fabulous gifts on her birthday and Christmas and sometimes "because she needs a bit of spoiling."  She rewarded them with hugs and kisses of genuine pleasure, and remained unspoiled, thank heaven. We stopped protesting their  generosity but I often felt that designer sandals or the latest lap-top computer were a bit too much  for a twelve year old. 
But Kirsty, when she turned fourteen, changed from an impulsive affectionate girl, given to throwing her arms around Mike and kissing him, to being withdrawn and sulky whenever her godparents visited. She became a textbook ghastly teenager, stormy and tearful for absolutely no reason, slamming doors and refusing to come out of her room to greet visitors and playing pop music until the house vibrated.
Amy laughed it off.
"Heavens, don't worry, I know teenagers are awful, don't you remember being that age? She's just growing up, that's all."
But I could see Mike was hurt, although the gifts continued  to arrive with every anniversary, usually in an envelope.

Once she was at college however, Kirsty blossomed into a lovely level- headed girl, a pleasure to live with and a good student. She qualified as a physiotherapist and took herself off to Australia for a year, weighed down by an enormous backpack and helped along by a fat cheque from Mike and Amy. This came in the post, and she phoned to thank them immediately, although I couldn't help hearing a certain coolness in her voice. I was saddened that she'd grown away from them while they still so affectionate and generous towards her but there wasn't much I could do about it.

After waving Kirsty off to Australia, Dave and I returned home a quiet, deserted house.
"Her room feels so empty," I remarked forlornly, feeling the tearful beginnings of empty nest syndrome. 
"Isn't it wonderful?" said Dave, "Let's thank heavens for e-mail and eat out to celebrate our independence!"
Trust my husband to see things in their right perspective.
We had decided on an expensive steak house in Kloof Street, and Dave was perusing the wine list when across the room I saw Mike, seated at a table for two. He had his back to us and he was with a very vivacious blonde who looked younger than Kirsty.
"Dave! Look over there!" I hissed, "Who's that girl with Mike?"
Dave took off his glasses and glanced across the room.
"Haven't a clue," he said briefly, "Could be a client. Anyway, it's none of our business."
Clients don't hold hands with their computer analysts, or slip off their shoes and run their toes up his leg under the table. I wasn't sure if we should greet Mike or ignore him, but  he solved the problem himself by leaving through the doors leading to the patio, his arm draped possessively over the blonde's shoulder.
"So what was that all about?" I persisted. Dave shrugged and refused to be drawn. Good guys don't gossip, not about their mates, anyway.
By co-incidence, the phone rang the very next day and it was Amy.
"Hi stranger," I said, "Have you just got back from far-off places?"
"No, I've been here, but busy. you know how it goes. Did Kirsty get off alright?"
"Yes, thanks to your incredible generosity. Honestly, a cheque that size wasn't necessary, Amy, you two shouldn't spoil her so much."
"Nonsense. What will that buy her overseas? A couple of hamburgers," she said dismissively. "Anyway, she's our goddaughter and it's our pleasure. What are you doing this morning? Feel like coffee? I've got some news."
I met her at a coffee shop, wondering if I should mention that we'd seen Mike the previous evening but decided not to. Dave was right, it wasn't our business.
When I saw Amy I was shocked. She had always been slim but now she was painfully thin, her face drawn and tired. It was three months since we'd met, and I wondered if she was suffering from some awful disease.
"How are you really?" I asked when the waiter had left. "You don't look so great."
"Alright. Life's just getting me down a bit."
"Are you on holiday?"
"No, didn't I tell you? I resigned two months ago. Mike's making the most ridiculous amount of money these days and I suddenly thought, what am I slaving away for? So now I'm doing pottery.taking painting lessons." Her voice trailed off.
"That's nice," I said dubiously, "How's Mike then?"
"He's fine."
There is definitely something wrong here, I thought.
"He's taking flying lessons."
"Yes, I know, he told Dave. Apparently he's bought his own plane?"
"Oh, you know Mike, he loves his toys. He's tried to justify it by saying it will be a tax write-off but really he just likes the idea of zooming around playing superman."
She twiddled her coffee cup.
"Actually, Mike and I are getting a divorce."
I was stunned. She gave a twisted little smile.
"Don't look so upset, Fran, it's not the end of the world."
"Isn't it?" I had difficulty in speaking. "Must you? Can't you two work this out?"
"No," with finality. "This has been coming on for a couple of years, it's not just a sudden decision."
"How could you get to this stage and not tell us?" I cried.
"Mike didn't want Dave to know we were having problems."
"What? You mean he hasn't said anything to him at all?"
"No. He kept hoping we'd sort of...come right."
  "I can't believe this, you always seemed to get on so well."
"Well, in front of other people we always did. But we're like two complete strangers at home. He moved into the spare bedroom a year ago."
"It must be awful, living like that."
"And d'you know why we didn't separate ages ago? Mike can't bear to let his friends and his bloody family think that his marriage has failed. Can you believe it, we've had  his mother over to Sunday lunch twice a month all these years.. she sits there going on about what a wonderful son Mike is and how lucky I am to be married to him and what a pity I never had children because Mike would make such a perfect father.and I have to listen to this with a straight face. Meanwhile I know that the minute he's dropped her off after tea, Mike will drive straight round to his little blonde tart he's been keeping down on the High Street. He didn't even have the decency to buy her a flat in another suburb. More convenient for him, I suppose."
I was silent.
"And while I'm letting it all hang out, I may as well tell you the rest. I've never spoken about this to anyone else. but he used to get drunk at the weekends and hit me. Didn't you ever wonder why I wore long sleeved blouses sometimes in summer? That's stopped now, since he's taken up with these lady friends of his, thank heaven."
 She looked at my stricken face and laughed.
"But the worst. are you ready for this? The worst is the pornography. He's got a collection he positively drools over. He downloads stuff from the Internet, and he's got a box of postcards. I saw some once and nearly got sick. Little girls of about ten years old. I suppose he's a paedophile really. You should see his latest girl - she's practically over the hill compared with his others and she's only seventeen.
I was appalled.
Funny, generous, successful Mike. Kirsty's godfather, my husband's best friend. a monster?
I was absolutely certain that Dave knew nothing about this side of him and I wondered what he's say when I dropped this bombshell. 
As if reading my thoughts, Amy said, "By the way, I know you and Dave are as one, and all that nonsense, but please don't mention this to him. Not the divorce or anything else. Mike must be the one to tell him, when he's ready to."
"Amy, that's crazy. If you're divorcing, everyone will know soon enough, including his mother and Dave. Surely he can't go on pretending nothing is happening?"
"Not after the end of this month, he can't. I'm moving out and the lawyer says it will take about three weeks to file the papers. But let him be the one to tell Dave. They've got a game next week, he'll probably mention it then."

I drove back, my mind frozen with shock. Amy's news had completely altered my picture of Mike and in one morning all those years of friendship and love he'd shared with us were stained with something evil and repulsive. And I couldn't help thinking- Kirsty! Had he ever tried to do anything to Kirsty? Was that why she turned so cold towards them both? Had she been damaged for life without our knowing?
That evening it took a superhuman effort not to report my meeting with Amy. Not that I wanted to be the one to say "By the way, did you know your best friend is a filthy old paedophile, a druggie and a weekend wife-beater?"
 Luckily there wasn't much time for him to notice my silence as he went out to a ratepayer's meeting and I pretended to be asleep when he got home.
Two days later I was in the garden when the telephone rang.
"Fran?"
It was Amy, her voice soft and flat.
"It's Mike. His plane crashed. He's dead."
"Stay there. I'm coming round."
She was sitting on the sofa staring into space, her eyes dry.
"Do you think he killed himself?" she asked tonelessly.
"Of course not. It was an accident, surely."
"Do you believe in the power of thought?"
"Oh come on, Amy, you didn't really want him to die. No, I don't believe that thoughts can crash a plane, absolutely not."
I made her some coffee and sat with her on the sofa and held her hand. I felt more upset than Amy looked, she seemed to be too calm and showed absolutely no emotion. Suddenly she jerked slightly.
"His mother. Oh lord, I'll have to tell his bloody mother. Come with me, please."
I drove her to the retirement home. Amy was perfectly controlled, even remembering to lock to door of her car before we went in. She held the old lady's hand and stared out of the window, while his mother cried soundlessly against her shoulder. I stood in the corner feeling like an interloper, listening to the words tumbling out between sobs.
"He was the best, the best son - they say God always takes the best. Oh Mikey, how could you go like that? Amy, how could you let him take up flying? I knew it would end badly..oh Mikey, Mikey."
The Matron came with a sedative and after half an hour we left.
"Come home with me, Amy. Sleep at our house tonight, you don't want to be on your own."
"No thanks, I've got things I must do. But thanks. For everything."
And that was that.
Amy didn't have to upset his mother by telling her they were on the brink of divorce, or the reason why. None of their friends had to know a thing, including Dave, although I planned to tell him later when the time seemed right.
Amy asked Dave to give the eulogy. He worked on his speech for two nights before the funeral and I prayed he'd get through it without breaking down.
But he was fine, and all the things he said about Mike were true, his love for his friend shining through for all in the church to hear. The tears ran unchecked down my cheeks, but they were tears for Dave and Amy.
Mike had been popular, and the church was packed with friends and business acquaintances.
"What a tragedy for Amy," they said at the tea afterward. "What a lovely couple they were. How she'll miss him." I watched Amy smiling sadly at people who came up to offer their condolences and thought how difficult it must be for her, pretending her grief.
When Amy put the house up for sale shortly afterwards, Dave said,
"Isn't she taking it well? Keeping busy, that's the best thing. Lucky, Mike had a flat on the High Street he'd bought as an investment, it will suit her perfectly. That huge apartment of theirs probably has too many memories."
She came to supper soon afterwards.
"I find it helps so much to talk of Mike," she said wistfully, with a wan little smile.  "And it's so comforting to be with you folks who knew him so well."
She'll tell Dave now, I thought. I hope she'll be tactful and leave out the stuff about the porn and the drugs. Just tell him about the girl friends and the divorce.
She spent the rest of the evening talking about Mike.
What a lovely man he'd been. His fabulous sense of humour, how he'd helped people in trouble, what a hard worker he'd been. What a wonderful father he'd have made, if only.
"It was his wretched work that killed him," said Amy sorrowfully. "He never let up for a minute. He was under terrible strain you know. I'd give anything to bring him back."
"I know you would, old thing," said Dave, his eyes moist. "I miss him more than I can say and it's ten times worse for you. But at least you can look back on all those happy times together."
"I was just so blessed for twenty years," she said softly. "Twenty wonderful years."
"
You made Mike a very happy man, Amy," said Dave gently.
She looked up into his concerned, affectionate face.
"Yes, we had each other, and that's all we ever wanted."
She didn't look at me, not once.

That was over a year ago, and that was the last time we saw Amy. She's completely cut us out of her life. Dave's hurt, he can't understand it. He keeps urging me to invite her round for supper, or for drinks. I've tried to, a couple of times.
But I know she'll never come.
If only she'd never told me.

 

Ginny Swart

 

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James Tobias

Would love your input on just one of my pieces. Show me yours and I'll show you mine?

2008-02-15

Mandy

This is a captivating piece of writing Ginny. It kept me guessing and wondering and I am still trying to piece it together.
Well done

 

Points 5 - Perfect! This piece of writing, in my opinion, cannot be improved!

2008-02-15

Louis

A remarkable tale of deception and abuse. A wonderful example of how characters can drive a plot. I am not new to Ginny's work.  She  rates as one of the most respected writers in my eyes.  Her words are strong enough to engage men, and flamboyant enough to attract women.  Most of her stories have a twist.   This one is no different.  What starts off as a banal family introduction, becomes a compelling read as blow after blow, Ginny unravels subjects like love, abuse and a motive for murder.  In the story, a question is raised,

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"Had he ever tried to do anything to Kirsty? Was that why she turned so cold towards them both? Had she been damaged for life without our knowing?"
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In the telling of the story, Fran is trying to seek out the answer. To me, she knows Mike molested Kirsty, she needs to find the places in her story, and she does. 

If Mike hadn't died in the crash, the narrator would probably have ended his life instead, that's how I felt this story was going.  The twist engaged me. 

As far as short fiction goes, this works.  A longer piece is sought after by this reader.

Well done Ginny
 
Points 5 - Perfect! This piece of writing, in my opinion, cannot be improved

2008-02-17

James

There is no doubting your talent. What caught my attention (outside of the story) was the glowing crits at the end. I decided to look at your other submissions and sure enough there was the very same justifiable praise.

As is my wont on discovering talent for the first time, I set about finding out more about the writer.

Alas, I didn’t find a publication that I might purchase. (Let me know if there is).

What I did realise from my search is that you are an esteemed judge for an imminent writing competition. So if you'll excuse me I'm off to submit my entry.

Great writing. I would give you a 5 but am concerned that it might come across as trying to curry favour.

(Besides I don’t believe in perfect writing.)

Points 4 - Pretty close to perfect. I was captivated

2008-02-21