I am this Seed

I am this seed that grows to live
I may not know what lies ahead
But I remain to change the life
For the carrier to embrace the living

Ntombizonke Mehlomakulu

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James	Again what seems to be a good idea is left just that.... an idea. It left me thinking...."Okay....and so?" Half-baked. Get involved with others writings and you will see a huge improvement in your own. My last word on the subject - promise. Points 2 - This writing needs a bit of editing and/or re-writing	2008-02-15